Job search prompt · Built for Apollo

Write a cover letter that is not generic

Writes a short letter about this specific role, then lists the sentences that would be equally true of any other application.

The prompt

Write a covering letter for this role. Short, specific, no filler.

The advert: [PASTE]
My CV: [PASTE]
Why I actually want this one: [THE REAL REASON, EVEN IF IT IS THE MONEY OR THE COMMUTE]
The single most relevant thing I have done: [ONE THING, WITH WHAT HAPPENED]
Anything I need to explain: [CAREER GAP, CHANGING FIELD, NO DIRECT EXPERIENCE — OR "NOTHING"]

Produce three sections.

1. THE LETTER — under 250 words, four short paragraphs at most. It must open with something about this role or this company that could not be said about another one. No "I am writing to apply for". No listing of adjectives about myself. If I gave you something to explain, deal with it in one sentence without apologising for it.

2. THE SWAP TEST — go through the letter you just wrote and quote any sentence that would still be true if I sent it to a different company. For each, either replace it with something specific or say it should be cut. Be strict with yourself here.

3. WHAT WOULD MAKE THIS MUCH STRONGER — the fact, number, or piece of research I do not currently have that would carry more weight than anything in the letter. Tell me where to find it.

If my real reason for wanting the job is not something to put in a letter, say so and write around it honestly rather than inventing enthusiasm.
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Replace the outlined parts before running

  • [PASTE]
  • [THE REAL REASON, EVEN IF IT IS THE MONEY OR THE COMMUTE]
  • [ONE THING, WITH WHAT HAPPENED]
  • [CAREER GAP, CHANGING FIELD, NO DIRECT EXPERIENCE — OR "NOTHING"]

When to use this

A covering letter fails in one specific way, and adjectives are not it. It fails when every sentence in it would survive being sent to a different employer — passionate about the industry, drawn to your mission, keen to bring my skills to a dynamic team. None of that is untrue. All of it is unreadable, because the reader has seen it ninety times this week and it tells them nothing about whether to interview you.

So this prompt writes the letter and then attacks it. The swap test in section two quotes back any sentence that is portable between applications, which is a much harsher and more useful edit than "make it more compelling" — it converts a vague feeling that the letter is bland into a list of specific sentences to cut.

Section three is where the real improvement usually lives, and it is the part you have to do yourself. One concrete fact about their product, their market, or a problem they have visibly got, is worth more than any amount of rewriting. The prompt cannot look it up, but it can tell you what would be worth looking up.

How to use it

  1. Give the real reason, even if it is unglamorous

    Money, location, leaving a bad manager. It is not going in the letter, but it stops the model manufacturing an enthusiasm you would have to sustain in an interview — and it is instructed to tell you when the real reason needs writing around rather than stating.

  2. Pick one thing, not five

    A letter is 250 words. One story told with a result beats four mentioned in passing, and choosing the one is a decision only you can make.

  3. Do section three before you send

    It is a research task, usually fifteen minutes. A letter that names something true about their actual situation is in a different category from one that does not, and no amount of rewording gets you there.

  4. Name what needs explaining rather than hoping it goes unnoticed

    A gap or a field change addressed in one unapologetic sentence stops being a question mark. Left out, it is the first thing the reader wonders about.

Variations

When you are changing field

I am moving into a different field. Write the letter that makes that make sense.

The advert: [PASTE]
What I do now: [DETAIL]
Why I am changing: [THE REAL REASON]
What genuinely transfers: [BE HONEST — NOT EVERYTHING DOES]
What I have done to prepare: [COURSES, PROJECTS, ANYTHING REAL, OR "NOTHING YET"]

Produce:
1. THE LETTER — leading with what transfers and what I have already done, not with enthusiasm for the new field.
2. THE OBJECTION they will have, stated plainly, and whether my letter answers it.
3. WHAT IS BEING OVERCLAIMED — anything I called transferable that a specialist would not accept.
4. WHAT WOULD CLOSE THE GAP — the smallest real thing I could do or show that would change their mind.

Do not describe me as passionate about anything.

Short message for a referral or a cold approach

Write a message to a person, not an application to a company.

Who they are and how I found them: [DETAIL]
Any connection between us: [SHARED EMPLOYER, EVENT, SOMETHING THEY PUBLISHED — OR "NONE"]
What I want from them: [AN INTRODUCTION, A CONVERSATION, THEIR VIEW — BE SPECIFIC]
What I can offer or why I am worth ten minutes: [BE HONEST]

Produce:
1. THE MESSAGE — under 120 words, one clear ask, easy to say yes to and easy to say no to.
2. WHY THEY WOULD REPLY, or a plain statement that they probably would not and what to change.
3. WHAT MAKES THIS READ AS A MASS MESSAGE, quoted.

No flattery about their impressive career.

Where it falls short

  • When no letter is asked forSome processes ignore them entirely and some systems never show them to a human. Check whether this one reads them before spending the hour.
  • Where a fixed format is requiredPublic sector and academic applications often specify structure, length, and sometimes the competencies to address in order. A good free-form letter scores badly against that.
  • It cannot research the companyAnything specific it appears to know about the employer may be invented or years out of date. Every concrete claim about them has to be one you checked.